Ohh I adore this! What an awesomely imagined world, man. I loved your characterizations of these two, right from the start, with Patrick only swearing at first, and Pete being a huge asshole who just didn't get it, the robot stuff. And the other characters! GERARD! I cannot even handle how much I loved that Gerard makes the robots, I grinned like crazy at that part. This is awesome, yay! :D