hey! i don't think i've read anything of yours before. :D /noob
this was immensely cute and lovely and fun. brendon's so bizarrely adorable! and ryan's just so ryan, aha. i think i pretty much cheered when they kissed, jeez. that's how happy the story made me! but i get entirely too caught up in these things altogether, so.
also, your dialogue is really good, drove the story along nicely.
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Date: 2009-08-29 11:23 am (UTC)this was immensely cute and lovely and fun.
brendon's so bizarrely adorable!
and ryan's just so ryan, aha.
i think i pretty much cheered when they kissed, jeez. that's how happy the story made me! but i get entirely too caught up in these things altogether, so.
also, your dialogue is really good, drove the story along nicely.
well done and whatnot. <3